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Margot
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0 posted 2004-09-07 04:51 AM



A moment of forever

A moment of forever
Found in your laugh
Your smile, your heart

Stop me in that moment
I'll live forever there
When you are with me

Those moment slip away
For all of us, gone
Never to return

But we can hold them
In our hearts and minds
Drinking, that moment of forever

Margot Hill
06Sep04

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

© Copyright 2004 Margot Hill - All Rights Reserved
Dreamer@
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Denmark
1 posted 2004-09-07 09:56 AM


Hi Margot

Nice poem i enjoyed, and ya right the feelings of love will always be there its just teh way they will be told, that makes it else then the other.

Smiles

Jes / Dreamer

Life is for mee to be, thats why i love to smile.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2004-09-07 10:03 AM


Margot, I love your smile! You shine Light into the world with such a radiant one. You are absolutely beautiful ~ as is this offering from your pen ~ and heart.

Love & Light,
EA

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-09-07 11:03 AM


Very lovely indeed....and I agree with EA..love your smile!!!
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-09-07 12:52 PM


touching write
Kristabell
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5 posted 2004-09-07 12:59 PM


Very true. And we should charish them.
Margot
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6 posted 2004-09-07 09:49 PM


Dreamer, Earth angel, Enchantress, passing shadows, Kristabell

Thank you all very much

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

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