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SEA
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0 posted 09-06-2004 11:16 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA




He smelled of cedar
crisp, like early mornings
in late September
with beautiful eyes
and a dangerous smile
making me wish for things
I didnít yet understand

innocence,
and romantic notions
of holding hands,
a heart stopping kiss
unexpected.....
He was poetry
written upon my soul
before I knew the words...

Those dreams, they donít fade
and that innocence
is never lost
and sometimes,
late in September
I am reminded
with the smell of cedar
and the memory
of that kiss.....


~SEA~
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1 posted 09-06-2004 11:19 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes


He was poetry
written upon my soul
before I knew the words...''


OH Susan....lord have mercy...what a beautiful feeling....this touches me in ways I have no words for....thank you

I donít want the world to see me
cause I donít think that theyíd understand
When everythingís made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

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2 posted 09-07-2004 12:03 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

thank you Lauren, you are always so nice
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Susan,
So you are holding to the innocent line then? Another excellent write, thank you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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4 posted 09-07-2004 02:05 AM       View Profile for Kevo   Email Kevo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kevo's Home Page   View IP for Kevo

Cedar?  This poem makes me want to find some cedar, rub it all over then go hug my wife and see if it invokes the same thing!  This was a memorable piece.  I can't relate to the cedar, though.  It smells great but not necessarily on a woman.  I prefer perfumes.  My wife always smells so soft and beautiful.  Whether she's wearing perfume or not.  This poem reminds me of the first time I met her.  Her smile, her charm, and her scent are all things that I cherish from our first meeting.  Thanks for taking me down memory lane for a moment with this beautiful piece of writing.  It really put a smile on my face.  Now, where the heck did I put that cedar?

Your poetic friend,

Kevin
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a beautiful write
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beautiful and i loved the pic

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Absolutely beautiful

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

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8 posted 09-07-2004 02:21 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

You kissed Prince!  Beautiful oh romantic Susan of the Sea.
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Who forgets that kiss?  



Well done!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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He was poetry
written upon my soul
before I knew the words...


Those dreams, they donít fade
and that innocence
is never lost
and sometimes,
late in September
I am reminded
with the smell of cedar
and the memory
of that kiss.....

Lord Sea, this is so hauntingly beautiful...what a wonderful line!


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...and now you have "Reminded" me!...

Thank you, SEA!

Love & Light,
EA
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12 posted 09-07-2004 02:55 PM       View Profile for sim0riah   Email sim0riah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sim0riah

Very Nice and Sweet...Looking forward to reading more from you...

sim0riah
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lovely, soft and very honest
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Larry...*bunny hugs* for you... thank you

Kevin...rofl be careful of splinters! Thanks so much

Dixie...thank you

MGROVES... thank you very much

Margot...thank you!

Sharon...good grief  I WISH!!! LOL thanks

Susan...*sigh* I know I never will...thank you

Donna you are so sweet, thank you!

EA glad to have reminded you, thank you

sim0riah...thanks very much, I will have to find you and read you too!

LeeJ...thank you for that
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innocence,
and romantic notions
of holding hands,
a heart stopping kiss
unexpected.....
He was poetry
written upon my soul
before I knew the words..."

This is how I feel about my love!  How wonderfully you write.  So glad to have read this tonight!
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16 posted 09-07-2004 11:20 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

He was poetry
written upon my soul
before I knew the words...

Sweet perfection SEA !! Love this.
Brought back memories of a special kiss at the age of sixteen and the perfume I wore called Woodhue by Faberge'. Thankyou for sharing this gem with us. Library bound! hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


ó Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

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17 posted 09-08-2004 01:00 AM       View Profile for ecrivan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ecrivan's Home Page   View IP for ecrivan

may you be so reminded

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SEA, this was a perfect reminder of one of my own memories...it's true, but with me it is October, not September.  Lovely, lovely writing, BTW.   .....jo
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Wow, very lovely, filled with many lines that cut through to me, to live warm under my ribs. Nicely done.

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

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20 posted 09-08-2004 08:04 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

I'm always reminded of how much I like to read your thoughts and words... when I see your name on the pages...

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21 posted 09-08-2004 11:11 AM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

And I am reminded how beautifully you write, gal

How I miss you and easy access to these blue pages.....

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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22 posted 09-08-2004 01:51 PM       View Profile for Ericc   Email Ericc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ericc

Beautiful.

Eric
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innocence is overrated.
this poem's not.

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24 posted 09-09-2004 12:18 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Msflame~ thank you very much

Chris~ glad it brought that special memory back for you!

Eric~ thank you

Jo~ Sept, Oct and Nov...best time of the year

Soul Drifter~ that was great, thank you!

Ron~

Interloper~ you dear one, are missed

Kissy Face~ thanks
 
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