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ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

0 posted 2004-09-06 06:20 PM

Acidic aimless missles arch the backs of doves that whistle
Crying out their lonely song
pain is creeping all along
the line – destined desiring to delve into a wiring
of deeper realms that mean so much more than time can keep

want
beyond this earthly topsy turvy plain so ugly murky
still
the beauty rains unlonley games we play but pains us only
tamed
by love or hate or dames or great the apple or the grape
sweet
we glisten rain remission reminiscin’ souls a-kissin
cores
of voids of souls of hearts of boys of girls and children’s toys
long
for heaven women one win mine not seven wives of mine can
dream
the real the truth that seals my heart could crush and cypress hills of
passion
deep my heart can keep eternal weeping angels seek
my heart and I will speak of lovely hearts eternity

- Haze

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2004-09-06 06:30 PM

Especially enjoyed the opening lines

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Kevo
Member

since 2004-06-02

Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA

2 posted 2004-09-07 02:18 AM

You are a gifted poet. I read one of your replies and have to agree that all gifts come from God. All of our creativity, inspiration, etc. My wife sings and draws quite well. My strength (gift) seems to be in writing. We all have these gifts through Grace that we have to appreciate and share. Your gift manifests itself here where it touches and inspires people like me. In turn, I do the same (at least I hope I do). you writing in this poem was brilliantly constructed, and held a lot of substance in its words. I loved every word of it and will be watching for more. Since this is the first I have seen of yours I want to say welcome to PIP. I am certainly glad you have decided to stay and make yourself comfortable.

Warm regards to you,

Kevin

ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

3 posted 2004-09-07 03:43 AM

I am glad that this poem touched you. I will be looking forward to reading your works as well. Thanks for welcoming and I'm sure I'll stay awhile.

- Haze

E S West
Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

4 posted 2004-09-07 05:15 PM

Very well done....a great read...

E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

5 posted 2004-09-07 10:00 PM

Thanks Es. I enjoyed writing it.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2004-09-08 06:14 AM

Goodstuff here....wiping my mouth from the food for thought..

love and hugs~

~ARH

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