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Lucie
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0 posted 2004-09-06 10:15 AM


Come see me in my "WHAT IF" world.
What if the world weren't round?
Would I then always find myself
falling off the ground?

Vacation in my "WHAT IF" World.
What if the grass weren't green?
Would a purple dew kissed valley
be as calming and serene?

What if in my "WHAT IF" World
your choices were erased?
Would you do it all the same?
Would life's paths be retraced?

Look hard at my "WHAT IF" world.
And wish upon a star.
Be happy in your heart and know,
things are the way they are.

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-09-06 10:51 AM


I would visit both of your worlds, Lucie...
I could use some purple dew!

Copperbell
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2 posted 2004-09-06 10:52 AM


  the imagination is a beautiful thing
Jes
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3 posted 2004-09-06 11:25 AM


Smile - What if ... hmmmmmm

If we only think what if, we look at the past and want to change it but if we look on tommorrow we are busy so we want think back on what if.... - smile

Liked it, smiles

Jes / Dreamer

Life is for me to be - but always with a smile !

Kristabell
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4 posted 2004-09-06 08:38 PM


Very well expressed. And you are so write!!
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5 posted 2004-09-07 02:04 PM


I live in a "What If" world,
Each and every single day.
If I don't like what's around me
I view it in a different way!

If we all had "What If" glasses
Perched high upon our nose,
Would that create a perfect world?
No, I don't suppose.


sim0riah
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6 posted 2004-09-07 02:24 PM


Lucie what ifs are the story of my life..Very nicely written

sim0riah

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7 posted 2004-09-07 02:42 PM


Living in two worlds makes life so much more interesting! It works for me!  

~ and I love purple dew! It smells like grapes!

Smiling here!
EA

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