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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
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Houston

0 posted 2004-09-06 10:15 AM


Confusion rules my love life.
My heart, ever searching, ever yearning.
Fears of abandonment and rejection map my journey.
Why the need to BE with someone?
Why choose together and not alone?
Why here and not there?
Why this and not that?
Why, WHy? WHY?

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Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

1 posted 2004-09-06 10:50 AM


Why not be yourself and don't worry about it - easy to say I know - my best experience in life was learning to accept and like myself - and in doing so I discovered that others like me just the way I am, and if someone doesn't, well I still like who I am
MyHeartofShadows
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since 2004-09-04
Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD
2 posted 2004-09-06 11:25 AM


I believe the proper response to that is why not.  But these days confusion does seem to be the controlling part of my home life too so I can understand this.  I believe also that things will work out, gosh they have to eventually.
Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 678
Portland, OR
3 posted 2004-09-06 08:41 PM


I know the feeling, but without those questions, there would be no need for answers. Nice write!
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