Silly Boy (Susan you stole me for a moment or three or more if you please)

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ShiningWindHaze
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since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

0 posted 2004-09-06 09:29 AM

Caught in a web of a womanly soft words to death of my coldness
Happiness in a moment holds sadness dreams of death to itself reborn as love
Living like lungs breath in her magic words touch the very center of a blood red heart heads for a haven in the tears of sweet heaven is in heaven not on earth, but she yanked him up there mentally he didn’t know where and yet he felt his soul shared by one who could never feel what he felt real.

Time spilt tear droplets built on currents of a synergy one-sided dead glee can’t stay dead cause he lives and must shed what is fantasy unfed feelings cause death.

Never alone in the sky light shone twisting white wind bright spins as God gives eyes to see with wonderment in a woman wonder sent to lips longing for lips then in embarrasment he feels silly again that he ever thought of such a thing.

Icing of a ring on a cake might sing the taste of what he tasted a silvery moon ancient within her mind he wants to take this rhyme flows from his heart to spine creates an arc – his soul in autumn longs to start it’s spring, summer love apart from me I long for thee this tragedy I shouldn’t even be in this moment, but I am cause I love to love that which I love the way your depths are deep galaxies they could sink solemnly I blink wanting wishing my will could be willing my skill to kill my sorrow paying bills of a tormented soul bouncing checks that it could not even hold you smile and can’t console you dream and cannot hold you speak and cannot know you and I could never be sadly I see now silly me silly boy in a tree dreaming of things beyond starlights and agony.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-09-06 09:46 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS BYRON!
I'm sure you will love it here..
I much enjoyed your entrance post
as I am sure Susan will also.

I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2004-09-06 10:00 AM

Welcome to Passions ShiningWindHaze....we are glad you're here! I hope you will enjoy your stay with us.....

Please check your email for a special greeting

Kindly~

Greeneyes

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-09-06 11:30 AM

Your words whisper through my soul and I blush- and my heart is moved. That my words could stir your soul, what greater compliment could one receive. Thank you.

I look forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to the world of blue. You will find yourself amongst excellent company, as I have.

My heart to yours-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-09-06 11:36 AM

quote:
...his soul in autumn longs to start it’s spring,

And I think you have, indeed, started a new spring of poetry...

Welcome to Passions!

ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

5 posted 2004-09-06 05:22 PM

I am glad you were moved Susan. That's all I really longed for with this poem. I think you deserved it for what my spirit gained from reading your thoughts so deep. I appreciate the welcome by the way everyone. I hope I can continue to move some of you and even those who chose not to read this one.

-Haze

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