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Open Poetry #33

Little Girls

MyHeartofShadows
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since 2004-09-04

Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD

0 posted 2004-09-06 06:01 AM

Little girls are made of creams
And powder, paint and dreams;
Then there are telephone calls,
Seems sugar and spice is not all.
Give me strength to make it through
While I learn what I'm supposed to do.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-09-06 06:18 AM

Ah yes, daughters- or so this speaks to me. I like it, it has a mother's truth to it-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

MyHeartofShadows
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since 2004-09-04

Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD

2 posted 2004-09-06 06:20 AM

Susan, it’s more a fathers confussion

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-09-06 06:37 AM

Ah yes, I see. Nice thing about this piece is that it can be viwed from many perspectives

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-09-06 08:46 AM

Oh, that age of daughters and sons and teenhood...

Here's a

and yes, you'll see it through - but not without some graying to the hair. They bring it on, I tell ya!

Enjoyed this very much!

MyHeartofShadows
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD

5 posted 2004-09-06 11:17 AM

could you bring that hug a little closer Sunny, I could barely feel it, but I can feel the thought behind it.

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