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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China 
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Fluid motions escaping the body The day a miss amongst the waves of human aura Words leaping from the lips that speak them Leaving trails in the blank space of reality Time accentuates each letter as it enters another's ear Expressions from vocal to physical captured in false photographs The where and when become muddled The being though, lingers longer then any other thought A radiant beam shines down as if it was an unseen bookmark A novel with no pages It seems like a painting the way people each interrupt One truth, one moment Two people sit and watch its’ conception Yet neither truly know what was there Blanks slates filled with chalk scribbles Each seeing a different colour and image Strangely it all takes shape into one form The oddities that we have in ourselves When one is one billion Strange those things that buzz around our heads Our very own blurry memories |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Welcome to Passions Poe....we are glad you're here! I hope you will enjoy your stay with us..... Please check your email for a special greeting Kindly~ Greeneyes~ I don’t want the world to see me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome, Poe! "A radiant beam shines down as if it was an unseen bookmark A novel with no pages" Those lines....so good. Much to ponder here. It is a phenomina how each of us see differently, and yet have commonalities, as well. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Well done, and welcome. |
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ShiningWindHaze Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 138California, United States |
Crafty. ^_^ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I'm sure you will enjoy yourself here. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
Thank you Greeneyes. Thank you Passing. Thank you Iliana, those as well are my favorite from the poem. It is also quite nice to cause someone to stop and think for a moment. Thank you Kaoru. I will take that as a compliment Shining and thank you. Thank you as well Nancy. Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Time accentuates each letter as it enters another's ear Expressions from vocal to physical captured in false photographs The where and when become muddled The being though, lingers longer then any other thought A radiant beam shines down as if it was an unseen bookmark A novel with no pages ~*~ I'm going to enjoy your writings. Welcome to Passions! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to the Passion's family Enjoyed your first post Have fun here  Chris |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
Thank you Deca, I hope that you do enjoy my writing from here on. Thank you Chris, I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Welcome to PIP, a very tender vision written here, loaded with visuals, this was awesome |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
Thank you very much LeeJ. I think with this poem I have set my bar to high. As I have recieved so many great responses I more then likely will not get this many again. Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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