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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2004-09-05 07:55 PM





For Karen with love
"You are Poetica"


Note: With thanks to Karilea with help in converting image to http.


The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

© Copyright 2004 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-09-05 08:06 PM


Wow, Dark Angel, this is beautiful!
a keeper

Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-09-05 09:06 PM


It was my pleasure to read this poem aloud to hundreds of people not so many months ago, but to see it with this wonderful photo only makes it more endearing...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-05-2004 11:16 PM).]

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3 posted 2004-09-05 10:00 PM


So beautiful and so deserving for Karen.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

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4 posted 2004-09-05 10:05 PM


Maree~

this is just stunning! WOW

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-09-06 01:05 AM


just gorgeous
iliana
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6 posted 2004-09-06 01:49 AM


Maree, this was a really, really fine tribute to our Serenity.  Her voice has a very large reach and she touches so many finding her way right to the heart of us.   ......jo
Dark Angel
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7 posted 2004-09-06 03:01 AM


Thanks all, I appreciate your comments..always.



Mxx

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

littlewing
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8 posted 2004-09-06 08:35 PM


This, I do believe
is one of the best
I have ever read from you Maree

Kevo
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9 posted 2004-09-07 01:24 AM


Maree,

I wanted to tell you that I thought "Clarion" and this one were as brilliantly written as your other posts.  You are an endless stream print-worthy works of poetic art that leave many of us with our jaws on the floor.  Your writing is refreshing, evocative, and unique.  Your creative spin on life is remarkably brilliant and a pleasure to share in.  I am sure that at some point I will pick something up at the bookshack with your name all over it.  Keep up the sharing and nice new pic.

Warm regards,

Kevo  

Dark Angel
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10 posted 2004-09-08 01:30 AM


Sue and Kevo, you're both too kind. Thank you.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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11 posted 2004-09-08 08:13 AM


hugs... to you and the one it is written for..


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12 posted 2004-09-11 09:28 PM


and oh I cry...what a beautiful welcome home present, my lovely luscious maree.

(and git out? I really do all of that? )

I love you back, yanno.

and oh yes, ma'am, I am keeping this one.

Smile.

(Does this make me an official muse?)

It's so great to be home again.

thank you my heart.

Beautiful.

passing shadows
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13 posted 2004-09-13 02:22 AM


love the new pic
Dark Angel
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14 posted 2004-09-13 08:05 AM


Cpat, hugs back and thank you.

Karen, Welcome home Gorgeous...

(and git out? I really do all of that? ) Oh you do a whole lot more m'lady.

(Does this make me an official muse?)
Ahuh

Passing Shadows...Thank you


The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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15 posted 2004-09-13 08:57 PM


Its probably best that I can't copy and paste my fave lines, because I couldn't choose between two anyway!

You write with such class, Maree. One to keep.

x Gem

p.s, Buon Giorno! it is morning for you now, isnt it? haha, I've started out here; http://www.bbc.co.uk/languages/italian/index_thankyou.shtml

It's fun(ny)! I sound like a berk.


Dark Angel
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16 posted 2004-09-14 04:16 AM


Sheesh Gem, you're too kind   Thank you.

and now it is my evening so...Buona Sera!

A "berk"? What's a "berk"? Please excuse my ignorance heh.

Mxx


The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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17 posted 2013-09-15 02:03 AM


Read her response to you - so typically Karen!  
wranx
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18 posted 2013-09-15 02:21 AM


OK, so I missed this the 1st time around. Seems theres a reason for everything

Happy you brought it back!

Time, time, time, where does it go?

nakdthoughts
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19 posted 2013-09-15 12:13 PM


Beautifully written and very meaningful especially today~~

M

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