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MyHeartofShadows
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0 posted 2004-09-05 07:38 AM



When times come back to me
And once more we are agin we
I will cry tears of joy.
But left in life I’ll carry on
Lost behind a fog of alone
I now cry tears of loss.

You left me bits of you
Things I must carry through
Bringing me bits of joy.
When I look in their face
They take me to another place
Before my tears of loss.

I wait when time bring new tears
Be it days, weeks, or many years
So we might share tears of joy
Together.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-09-05 08:44 AM


Welcome to Passions, MyHeart.  I enjoyed your new poem.  Take some time to look around, get to know us, and you'll find a whole lot of good things in store for you!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-09-05 08:57 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I so much enjoyed your first post!
I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes. ~

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just out of reach
3 posted 2004-09-05 11:47 AM





passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-09-05 12:28 PM


love your screen name! nice!

Welcome to Passions I'll be looking for more of your poetry

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2004-09-05 12:36 PM


Welcome to Passions.

Such pain written in this first post, conveyed with grace.
Will look for more of your works.
ThisDiamond

Susan
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6 posted 2004-09-05 03:36 PM


Your words well portray loss and hope -

Welcome to the pages of blue- I think you'll like it here

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Kristabell
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7 posted 2004-09-05 03:38 PM


Welcome to the site. Very nice poem.
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8 posted 2004-09-05 04:18 PM


Welcome to Passions

we are glad you're here!

Please check your email for a special greeting


Kindly~

Greeneyes~

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

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Gaia
9 posted 2004-09-05 06:28 PM


A poignant write, MyHeartofShadows.
Welcome to the blue pages!

MyHeartofShadows
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10 posted 2004-09-05 09:09 PM


My Thanks to all who have responded for making me feel so welcome
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