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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-09-05 03:01 AM


Thats All


If you want to be
my butterfly
fly a little closer
and stay a lot longer
so I can admire
your beauty.

If not, just fly away
and let some other guy
admire your butterfly day.
That's all I
have to say.


JamesLee
August16
2004
I know you
will anyway.

© Copyright 2004 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-09-05 03:46 AM


short and to the point...well said

very heartfelt

~K~
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2 posted 2004-09-05 03:47 AM


Is it?

If that's all

that's everything

& if that's everything
everyone
is going to be
disappointed

All our voices
joined
& this
was all
we could
come up with

MGROVES
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3 posted 2004-09-07 05:03 AM


liked this, kinda sad though

    


Margot
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4 posted 2004-09-07 05:05 AM


Well written

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

E S West
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5 posted 2004-09-07 05:30 PM


Like this...to the point....  E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

Kristabell
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6 posted 2004-09-07 05:33 PM


Very nice. I hope your butterfly stayed!
MGROVES
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7 posted 2004-09-07 07:39 PM




liked this


JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-10-29 08:08 PM


Thank you all for the nice response...yes my butterfly is still around...but she's free to go if she desires...who am I to try to hold a butterfly...James
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