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~K~
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since 2004-07-27
Posts 148


0 posted 2004-09-05 01:25 AM



Time to write
it down again,
the way you
free me
from my skin.
The way you
get inside
my head,
illicits
inspiration.

Time to find
the exit signs
and proceed
with drawing lines
worth stepping over.

It's time to
chart the map
to circle
your location
to recognize
and grasp
the implications
and dive in
regardless.

© Copyright 2004 ~K~ - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-09-05 01:27 AM


~K~ -- WOW, dive in, yes you did!  Much enjoyed!   .....jo
miscellanea
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2 posted 2004-09-05 01:43 AM


Your title drew me here, and I'm glad it did!

Time to write
it down again,
the way you
free me
from my skin.
The way you
get inside
my head,
illicits
inspiration.

Nifty way to put it.  A wonderful read from title to end.  A keeper indeed.

           miscellanea

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-09-05 02:23 AM


fantastic ending!
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4 posted 2004-09-06 08:04 AM


dive in regardless...

sometimes thats the right answer
and whatever happens, happens

swim carefully


Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-09-06 11:58 AM


Yes.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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6 posted 2004-09-07 02:01 PM


Ha! I love this . . .
Seems like my life's motto - sheesh  

jellybeans
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7 posted 2004-09-07 02:14 PM


I like this, very much, your writing reminds me of mine, though I have noone special to be my inspiration...sigh...want to trade places?
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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8 posted 2004-09-07 02:32 PM


'the way you
free me
from my skin.'

loved that line!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2004-09-07 02:34 PM


agreeing with Susan here, loved those lines!
Earth Angel
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10 posted 2004-09-07 03:00 PM


I used to be quite the procrastinator. Now I tend to just jump right in! If I always waited to be motivated or inspired, I would not get nearly as much done as I do in my life ~ and there would also be a lot of missed opportunities!

Yeppers! First I intuit, then I dive in and do it! lol


EA


LeeJ
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11 posted 2004-09-07 03:02 PM


I liked the way this felt...happy feelings
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