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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-09-04 12:19 PM


That Which Makes
Something What It Is


Last night I had
a dream, not like
my usual one's.
This was a dream
about essence,
the essence of a
special one.
She is what she is,
her essence flowing
like a silky stream.
She is the woman
that I love, her
essence permeating
my hopes, my dreams.

JamesLee
September03
2004


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Larry C
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1 posted 2004-09-04 12:21 PM


Nice,
Larry C

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-09-04 05:00 AM


pretty
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-09-04 07:21 PM


Thank you Larry and passing for the nice remarks...James
MGROVES
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4 posted 2004-09-07 05:13 AM


very nice


MGROVES
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5 posted 2004-09-07 07:58 PM


there's that romantic heart i love to hear   


Kristabell
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6 posted 2004-09-07 08:09 PM


She must be someone special. Your writing is beautiful.
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