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time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

0 posted 2004-09-03 06:18 PM

In the place where we met
The slaves of destruction
Introduce me to the mysteries
of darkness beyond the night.
Birds have eaten the breadcrumbs
Left on the path as a guide
To finding the way back,
To that one place beyond time
Where I cannot be found.
Hastily, I place all my poems
In bottles for the sea,
So that in time, they may wash
Upon some far distant shore.
Where, amidst the grains of sand
You may find some fragments
that once upon a time were me.

E S West
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since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

1 posted 2004-09-03 06:29 PM

I shall watch for your your words adrift next I an near the sea... enjoyed much...

E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

2 posted 2004-09-03 06:34 PM

thanks E S, I shall make sure one is addressed to you.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-09-03 06:39 PM

Oh I would love to receive a poem in a bottle from you...
please send one my way...love this piece!
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes. ~

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

4 posted 2004-09-03 06:52 PM

Enchantress, we shall have to trust to the currents to deliver.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-09-04 12:27 PM

Enjoyed...James

~K~
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since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

6 posted 2004-09-04 12:37 PM

Yeah, I want one too...but I want it tape recorded because New Zealanders have the best accents! You don't know Lucy Lawless do you!?

Anyway, nice poem. I really loved this:

In the place where we met
The slaves of destruction
Introduce me to the mysteries
of darkness beyond the night.

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

7 posted 2004-09-04 03:27 AM

JamesMichael, thanks for taking the time to read.

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

8 posted 2004-09-04 03:29 AM

K, as I keep telling everyone, New Zealanders don't have accents, everyone else does, can't help you with the Lawless connection, sorry.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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9 posted 2004-09-04 05:06 AM

wonderful piece

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