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The Door
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The Door |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Door I often open up the door To all the memories that I store Light a candle in the past Watch the shadows of its cast In the light of phantoms dwell I sip a cup, illusions well To dance the dance of fantasy Upon the sands naivety It is my roam away from home The epitome within my tome The essence of my knight’s abode The code allegiance and the ode It is my alter ego’s seem It shares my heart and all it’s dream It is the flint within soul And the footprints of my goal It is the bail that sails the bend It is my evermore and end. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Simply lovely and how true of us all. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
well you've done it again Sey, made it impossible for me to pick a favorite verse. You are the master of rhyme divine! Morning hugs  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful beautiful morning read Sy. I do hope you and your loving wife are someplace safe now... Let us know how you do through this hurricane. You sit and relax, or try to, and I'll pour this morn.  ~Morning hugs, prayers & tea, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Shut that door, if only for a day or two, and buckle down for Frances...there'll be bailing enough soon enough as it is! Hang tight, Sy! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Good luck with the storm. They say now that it is slowing down but the wind speed is decreasing as well. |
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mrmojorisin5908 Member
since 2004-05-03
Posts 103Colorado |
"when the doors of perception are cleansed, everything becomes what it is, infinite" -William Blake |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, I'd like to find that door! You ARE the man. Nice. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...Beautifully crafted. Enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
It is the door for me, too. Much enjoyed this one, dear friend. I am hoping you are safe today and miles away from the mighty storm.  ........jo |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hey Seymour. I needed that! Thanks my friend. I knew I could count on you to bring a smile to my face tonight. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sir T, may there never be an end to your evermore! This was a downright wonderful write! Angel hugs, EA |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Don't we all. If not, you're not living, right? This is a seamless, flowing work of art. Well written and beautifully painted as always! It was a great pleasure to read and brought a rather large smile to my face. Warm regards to you, Kevin |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all my friends, I was blown off line for a while but then we all get blown off for a while sooner or later. Your answers fade the hurricane away. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
In years to come Sy I can enjoy this poem and will always remember how one man over 3,000 miles away could make me smile on even the darkest day. I will light a candle to the past, and enjoy all the fond memories that it will cast.  To Forever Friends |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon,  |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Very true. But because you do not have a lock on that door, you are able to realize that. This is nice work. Just do not stay on one side of the door or the other. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kristabell There is a passage way. Thank you |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very good enjoyed |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
as only you can pen it |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Thank you so much. hoot, and a hug. |
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