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Larry C
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0 posted 2004-09-02 11:09 PM



Twenty Month Old Gardner
By Larry Chadwick
Robbie my brother a story from 1951


Robbie was just a little guy,
Living in a diaper still.
Went to play in grandpa’s garden,
When he took a little spill.

There are those who do not know,
And think that it’s a weed.
But this little guy did not care,
He was just helping grandpa’s need.

This little guy so small,
Did not need to even bend.
He just reached out and pulled,
As hard as he could from one end.

More successful than he dreamed,
The stock broke off sooner then it “oughter”.
As he toppled diaper, rhubarb and all,
Right into the water.


September 2, 2004



If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.
© Copyright 2004 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-09-02 11:16 PM


giggling here... such a cute story! Where is the camera at moments like this? But then those memories are still captured(within our hearts), and we cherish them
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2 posted 2004-09-02 11:22 PM


What a cute story!
Thanks for popping in tonight Larry and sharing that with us.
Would have made a great 'Kodak Moment'.
Hugs~

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I still have sand in my shoes. ~

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3 posted 2004-09-03 12:38 PM


Enjoyed...James
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4 posted 2004-09-03 01:47 AM


I sure hope someone got the look on his face when that rhubarb gave way?  Nice to see you writing fun family stories Larry.
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5 posted 2004-09-03 07:36 AM


Now why is it I'm thinking
that your bro is less impressed
than the rest of us who're grinning?

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6 posted 2004-09-03 09:37 AM


Larry~
What a delightful little giggle-schmiggle to share~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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7 posted 2004-09-03 10:24 AM


~smiling~....

I have many like that but my brothers sure wouldn't appreciate the ones I would have to tell.

hugs
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8 posted 2004-09-03 12:21 PM


precious
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9 posted 2004-09-03 01:10 PM


What a cute story! One of the ones that gets told at every family get together, right?

~sky

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Do your best, just keep on laughing
It's all on you, there's always a brand new day. -Avril Lavigne

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10 posted 2004-09-03 02:23 PM


ahhhhhh rhubarb!  I WANT SOME!!! You can't find it here in Houston. Dreams of Rhubarb Custard Pie.. mmmm.. and memories of sitting at the picnic table outside with a little pile of salt and a fresh stalk of rhubarb. (did I ever care that the birds ate there too?) ... among other things.. hehe ....hmmmmm

you bring back childhood to me Larry C. and my first time mowing the lawn all by myself.. mom was mad that I accidently mowed down the new tulip shoots.. hehehehhahahah

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.


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11 posted 2004-09-03 02:58 PM


heart hugs.....precious moment caught in time....

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

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12 posted 2004-09-03 03:04 PM


ah Larry, enjoy your sharing of such delight with us. What a treasure. so good to see you home again!
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13 posted 2004-09-03 03:11 PM


I figured, from the title, this was going to be good.
I wasn't wrong.
/:-)

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14 posted 2004-09-03 05:52 PM


Larry,
  This was a cutie!  Enjoyed a bunch!
                  misc'e

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15 posted 2004-09-03 06:58 PM


Nothing like a little slice of life to fill a man's plate....fun write, Larry
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16 posted 2004-09-04 12:07 PM


Susan,
Yes indeed a Kodak moment! And he was such a drama king as a child. LOL And thanks.

Nancy Lee,
My pleasure and thank YOU. It was a Kodak moment. But no picture required for me!

James,
Thank you sir.

Thanks Sharon,
And it does feel good too! Nope, no pics.

Karilea,
Because it's all about pride! And thanks for reading.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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17 posted 2004-09-04 12:10 PM


Marge,
Thank you sweet friend. I like that!

M,
Does that mean you aren't telling? Please, pretty please. And thank you.

ps,
Thanks.

sky,
Not often enough! And thanks.

Lucie,
Thanks that was fun. I have a mowing the rhubarb story!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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18 posted 2004-09-04 12:13 PM


Lauren,
Thanks. It really is...

Donna,
Thank you. It is nice to be back. And I appreciate the welcome.

Krawdaddy,
Thank you kind sir!

misc'e,
Thanks I do appreciate that.

'deer,
Thanks. Slice of rhubarb pie, right?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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19 posted 2004-09-04 01:08 PM


This cute little story put a smile on my face.

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

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20 posted 2004-09-04 10:08 PM


LOL! This is cute. Your poems have always been a delight to read.
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21 posted 2004-09-04 10:44 PM


Picturing something similar in my Grammie's rhubarb patch... Even AFTER we were out of diapers... I loved this one, Larry...
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22 posted 2004-09-04 10:49 PM


You bring poetry to life Larry Dear,
and this is a mighty fine example,
and just as sweet as can be.

Many hugs to you~

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23 posted 2004-09-05 01:03 AM


Well, Grandpa Poet, this was just darling!  I could just picture it!  Much enjoyed.....jo
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24 posted 2004-09-05 02:11 PM


Alli,
Good and thank you. And grandpa's garden was an awesome place.

Sue,
You are a delight, thank you.

Nan,
There are lots of rhubarb stories it seems. Maybe there is a challenge somewhere in that. And thank you.

Lori,
It is wonderful to see you here and thank you dear poet.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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25 posted 2004-09-05 11:41 PM


Now this is precious

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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26 posted 2004-09-06 12:45 PM


Dark Angel,
And that was very kind. Thank you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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