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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2004-09-02 10:14 AM

2:45 A.M. Serenade

rumbling stumbled
onto glass panes
crashed along
in the wake
of striking

I ticked off the
seconds
rolling with
the rumble again

my Muse, amused,
and thus enthused
started harking
on sounds of sparking
with her 2:45 a.m. serenade

she briefly
kicked me around
and I thought it sound
to reach and stretch for pad
and pen

but
I rolled into you
again
held on to you
again
as your whispering
whispering
led me in

Muse hiked....

I lolled
within your quietness
held you warm between caress
then led you along in some
confess

for we never see us in a mess
nor claim we're under any
duress

then
found again
some sleeping time
until the 4:45 cannon
primed

rumbling stumbled
onto glass panes
crashed along
in the wake
of striking

rolling with
the rumble again

thinking of all
that had been before
I reached
and found dreams
amour

your place empty
as were my arms

thunder's alarm brought
me to full awake

my Muse hiked
on back to me,
for having dreamed
of only you
and in the grasp
of certainty
I,
left alone,
but for Muse
and me

~*~

Slightly revised,

and with much thanks to my Muse for never quite leaving me entirely alone....

and when she does, thanking the Wizard for the archives...

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2004-09-02 10:28 AM

she briefly
kicked me around
and I thought it sound
to reach and stretch for pad
and pen

Oh... how well I know this!!! *S* For that matter... I know the rest well, too... was jealous of that cuddle for a while... then realized that dreams sustain us both. *S*

Beautiful write! *S*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-09-02 11:27 AM

Beautiful Deca!
I'm so glad your muse does not leave you alone for long.

Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes. ~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-09-02 12:38 PM

I know what you mean

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2004-09-03 09:35 AM

Listen up, class -- anybody still seriously think that words can't be made to sound like the very thing they're describing?

Nice bangity-booming, Deca!

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