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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2004-09-02 09:19 AM

Strange Waters

He slid a word under her
gently

her bible belt slipped,
undefined sensitivities
peered over the edge
into wonder

allowing her hills and valleys
by inclination
to heave with quake alone

she roamed Missouri
no longer
and Baja sand was not safe
even when in waters
ankle deep

the riptide pulls

even while he holds her
with one more tanned word

and the cocoanut oil
glides with shine

almost as slick as he

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-09-02 09:25 AM

Oh my Deca Deca!!!
What a wonderful read this early morn.
I have missed you and this...your special touch of pen.
Into my library it goes!!
~Hugs sweet lady~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes. ~

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
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2 posted 2004-09-02 09:57 AM

Wow! Gotta love that lotion, eh? Especially on a deserted beach....or a deserted anything....

Just a thought, but it seems to me that the names "Bible Belt" and "Tornado Alley" describe pretty much the same territory....now I know why!

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kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

3 posted 2004-09-02 09:59 AM

This has so much below the surface(and some right on top) that the reader can take it anywhere in the imagination! Well done! KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

4 posted 2004-09-02 12:43 PM

glad you reposted!

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2004-09-02 04:32 PM

Oh ab so lut ely lovely Deca

Glad you reposted.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2004-09-02 06:26 PM

dang he has his hands full
and she don't mind
his touch

kewl stuff ms d

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

7 posted 2004-09-03 05:33 PM

He slid a word under her
gently

her bible belt slipped,
undefined sensitivities
peered over the edge
into wonder

Oh my goodness, Deca! What incredible imagery! I love your style, Lady!

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