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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-09-01 09:55 PM


you want words
you want to hear me scream
telling you of my darkest dreams
my darkest thoughts
you want words

you need words
my words,these words..these words
that are wrapped around my heart
pulsing through my veins
you need words

you want words
breathe through me
breathe me in
take these words to your heart
take my words to heart
you want words

you need words
you'll let it soak into you
my words
flwoing through your veins
is this really what you call safe
is this what you call love
you need words



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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2004-09-02 12:26 PM


Yes, words and action...James
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-09-02 01:31 AM


Yes, sometimes one needs to hear words.  

In this I hear frustration and anger, is this correct?  As if your words were daggers being thrown.  Very emotional write.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-09-02 04:52 AM



Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
4 posted 2004-09-02 07:16 AM


words are never enough...
but sometimes they can fill the spaces between...
i undertsand the frustration in this one, but there's more than that in this poem.
you give me much to think about, and i like it when a poem does that.

superb.

it's not that the future is near or far...
the future's just so grim.

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