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Paul Wilson
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0 posted 2004-09-01 05:18 PM


Chance Meeting
By Paul Wilson


Shall we dance this dance
among the stars and moon
Might we temp fate
as angels play lovers tune

A glance of eyes
in chance of blush
Gentle heartbeats
change to rush

A meeting of chance
fate gifted to us
Tender hearts learning
how too trust

The night is young
or so it seems
A million dances shared
a lifetime of endless dreams

The moon quietly hides
it’s face in tender weep
Angels sing their lullaby
as you fall asleep

Moments shared in time
between you and I
Lifetime spent together
now we say goodbye




~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-02-2004 06:46 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-09-01 05:51 PM


How heartfelt this piece of poetry...so nice to see your name amoung the blue pages
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2 posted 2004-09-02 06:40 AM


hoot_owl_rn... Thanks so much for the read and reply. I don't get much free time these days to visit these pages of blue, but always will visis when I can...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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3 posted 2004-09-03 10:25 PM


Paul,
I really like this. You have a tender heart and a warm way with words. Well done...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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4 posted 2004-09-03 10:44 PM


Love to have a dance with you Paul..
This is so sweetly melancholy.
Very nicely penned.
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes. ~

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Paul Wilson
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6 posted 2004-09-04 10:19 AM


Larry...Thanks for your tender words. Very much appreciated...Paul

Nancy...Perhaps one day we shall dance. Thank you so much for being a bright star in the night for me.Thanks for the read.I read where people were telling you welcome back, so welcome back dear lady from where ever you've been...Paul

passing shadows... No reason too be sad, just some fictional ramblings from an old softy. Thanks for taking time to read & reply...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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7 posted 2004-09-04 10:36 AM


This long quiet love....everyone should be so blessed. This poem makes me happy, just reading it.

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8 posted 2004-09-04 11:12 AM


This carries the beauty of two who knew what it was to "be together" and I'm with passing shadows it is always sad to see such love end- even if it is only a pause in the breath of existence - and even if it is only fictional-

simply lovely

  Susan

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9 posted 2004-09-04 11:58 AM


Paul this was as precious as the stars that light the sky , love such as this remains in the heart long after goodbye

Hope

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10 posted 2004-09-04 05:37 PM


Ed...Thanks for your thoughtful words. I feel I am blessed too have shared my life with one person...Paul

Susan...The end of our relationship will be very sad and hard too take. I can only hope that all of our memories will get us through it. Thanks for your touching reply...Paul

HopeS...You are so right, our memories shared will always be precious too us. Thanks for taking time too read and for your sweet reply...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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11 posted 2004-09-10 12:40 PM


this was really beautiful


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12 posted 2004-09-10 04:33 PM


Unless you have two left feet like me (smile) always avoided the dancefloor. I like the progression of the poem, very nice.
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13 posted 2004-09-10 04:59 PM


Than you for sharing your heart, it is beautiful!
~Love and Jugs
~ARh

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


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