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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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I can conjure your presence Just by closing my eyes Shut the world away And fantasize I am holding your body So close to mine Your love is the answer I’ve searched to find Your touch the fulfillment Of unexpressed dreams You’re the reason I breathe Or so it seems To simply know you Would make me feel blessed How lucky I am To belong to the best! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
To simply know you Would make me feel blessed nicely worded... *s M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSuthernGirlieGirl~ 'Your touch the fulfillment Of unexpressed dreams You’re the reason I breathe Or so it seems' I LOVE the softness of this~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ p.s. Thanks for the email of concern as Frances decides where she's coming ashore~ The prayers are graciously appreciated~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
PS, LeeJ & nakdthoughts: Thank you, ladies! *S* I appreciate your read! *S* Marge: I'm so glad you like it... thank you! *S* Take care of you... believe me... I know. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
sigh, sigh, sigh...when I read this I know just what is missing in my life...this is a wonderful wonderful expression of love |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yours? Or Ours? Yep. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
To simply know you Would make me feel blessed How lucky I am To belong to the best! This is a statement and wish that many of us most certainly would enjoy feeling and experiencing. A very positive and enlightening poem, thanx Suthern. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Laura, this is simply beautiful. Marge has it right, the softness of it, the grace, is breathtaking. This one goes into the library for sure. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
jellybeans: Thank you so very much, my friend. *S* Sunshine: Yes... absolutely! *S* Thank you! Magnus: Thank you so much... I'm glad you liked it! *S* Ratleader: You honor me, my friend... and I thank you for finding this a keeper! *S* James: Thank you! *S* |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
This sound like a Hallmark card that they went to an outside source for the words cuz they couldn't come up with something this well written.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Toerag: Thank you very much, my friend! *S* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Suthern beloved one I didn’t respond to this earlier because, well actually I don’t have a valid reason for not replying, other than I was going to but didn’t come to do it until now. This is an excellent poem from you darling one, the flow within is exquisite, absolutely lovely. You know I have a preference for anything from you, but that’s because your writing is consistently excellent. Your language usage is only equalled by the way you let the rhyme flow effortlessly. Again I’m awed, this looks simple but is in fact complex, that is the sign of a beautifully crafted piece, I love it utterly, utterly, utterly. And I’m rather fond of you too  (I guess that shows doesn't it?)Mmmmm thought so and forever Mushy  Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Pure delight Dave |
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