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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I remember... when I could feel those words you never say and maybe I am too free with them in my mind because they want to come out of my lips but I am never sure if that is what you want to hear a kiss is not just a kiss.... to me "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
no, it certainly isn't.... your in rare form today, meaning that in a flattering way...this was a heart stopper, where you need to go back and read it again and again... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have one of those whopper headaches today, Lee, that keeps my mind moving and never in one direction...so you may have to excuse me today  M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
no excuse necessary...not in the least, your allowed...smiles and hugs...wet a cool cloth and place it on your forehead, or an ice bag, and if you don't have an ice bag, then use frozen peas or corn...it might help wishing you a better day, within the next moments...my sister says to soak in a warm tub for migrains, as it helps the blood flow better? Both have worked for me? Take care and be well... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have been there this morning having done just that and am sitting here as the headache takes a slight leave~~ half my day is gone...and all I have to show for it is words hugs and thanks (I am use to my body driving me crazy...partially an age thing, the rest my inability to field stress) M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well sister, let me make one thing perfectly clear...these are not only words you've written today but a tremendous melding of metaphoric array...which lightened my life... a whole bunch! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and now I am ~smiling~ hugs M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like this...short and sweet |
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E S West Member
since 2004-08-31
Posts 116California |
A story well told, though too many times has it played for me... E S West |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
As with Casablanca’s script, And the song that goes with it A sigh is just a sigh As time goes by, But does the time going by, Slowly or quickly slip Become controlled by whom we’re with? Gloom |
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