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Open Poetry #33

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earthdust
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since 2003-10-28

Posts 53
predestined and foreknown

0 posted 2004-08-31 11:32 PM

as i come home from work,
and you greet me at the door,
your smile welcomes me,
like the pearly gates of heaven.

gates watched over by two beatiful angels,
with big bold brown halos,
magnifiscent they are, those eyes of yours.

the smell of honeycombs breezes in the windy sunlight...
and my heart flutters with the sway of your gorgeous hair, dancing like the daffodils,

lovely you are, my wife.

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2004-09-01 01:52 AM

nice tribute to your wife

One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-09-01 03:26 AM

very sweet

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2004-09-01 07:56 AM

daffodils, are a sweet touch here

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2004-09-01 07:57 AM

Very sweet gift for your wife. Welcome to Passions.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-09-01 07:58 AM

and she smiles at you, knowing in her heart that she has been blessed with the kinship of her soul mate...

Tremendous write

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-09-01 12:49 PM

Lucky her. Well expressed.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2004-09-01 07:36 PM

Enjoyed...James

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