navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » Touch me
Open Poetry #33
Post A Reply Post New Topic Touch me Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Margot
Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154


0 posted 2004-08-30 09:07 PM


Touch me

Feeling the wit, the wisdom
Of your tongue tickling me
Teasing my mind
I find my world
Topsy turvy
From the logical
To the improbable
Then turned sideways
From searing grief

As I breathe your words
Knowing the truths
Of others
Who have walked this path
Before me
I find solace
in your spirit
And hope
In the muse
That surrounds and renews me
Reminding me
Feeling the wit and wisdom
Of your tongue tickling my soul

Margot Hill
30Aug04

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

© Copyright 2004 Margot Hill - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
1 posted 2004-08-30 09:12 PM


I hope he does...such a blessing for you
that would be.

Margot
Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154

2 posted 2004-08-30 10:49 PM


Magnus,

Thank you very much

Margot

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-08-31 03:47 AM


good write
Margot
Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154

4 posted 2004-08-31 03:58 AM


Thank you -margot
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2004-09-01 07:16 PM


Enjoyed...James
Margot
Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154

6 posted 2004-09-01 08:54 PM


jamesMichael

Thank you

Margot

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
7 posted 2004-09-02 08:04 PM


Such visions of a playful soul here...
Beautiful
TD

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
8 posted 2004-09-02 08:37 PM


Very nicely done...much enjoyed!!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes. ~

Margot
Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154

9 posted 2004-09-06 09:41 PM


TD & Nancy

Thank you very much

Margot

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » Touch me

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary