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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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The Sun burst ripe and wanting, a flare lit and streamed across the sky, leaving streaks of rainbows hailing down upon the children, wide-eyed in wonderment standing still, mouths wide open - catching snowflakes. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh... I like this very much. *S* And the incredible image you end with... excellent! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
smiling here, as I am still waiting to catch one of THOSE snowflakes  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
thank you suthern so very much Kacy LMAOOOO I laughed out loud when I saw this OMG . . . these are the kinds of snowflakes you dont know you have caught . . huh? see? . . . yep . . . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFLMAO! OK, see what happens when you try to speed read poetry and do the laundry at the same time?  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
suzieeeeeeeeeeessssssssss in luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is a very cute poem...visual as well. I never have caught a snowflake in my mouth yet, but if it snows...you bet I am gonna try. |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Reminds me of the Montana winter that is on the way... and that everything has its own unique beauty to it. Thanks for the read... -Rdz One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sue I felt the forth of July in this...like I did as a kid....  |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Wonderful Margot Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
awesome , little w beautiful images ~jw ((hug)) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kacy . . . ahahah I know all too well (where do you think this write came from hmmm?) Hey Eric thank you so much! Michele!! Good Lord . . . look at you I think you are in luvvvvvvvvvv LMAOOO aww Barry please do - *smiling* thank you . . . Rd - you are most welcome and yes! NY winter coming here . . . Martie - you know after I wrote it I thought the very same thing, like sprinkles of fireworks falling all around . . . *smile* thank you Thank you so much Margot Hey James . . . thank you so much ((hug)) Thanks guys |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
years ago, it snowed here in Florida I was up at 2am catching snow on my tongue awesome stuff here girl! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Not knowing the punchline, I missed the innocence, as this so eloquently spoke: "wide-eyed in wonderment standing still, mouths wide open - catching snowflakes." (damn-I'd-love-to-have-that-back) off to e-bay in search of a hymen!  Two'll get ya one I find it, too. sheesh. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You inspire! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how precious and beautiful |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah Sue, you make me long for the winter. Stunning work gal pal. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome Sue....wonderful. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
You made me reflect on memories of lost innocence. Once I was a young boy who believed... Thank you for the memory. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Dix - good for you (snowed!!)and thank you Karen . . . me too and yes please on that order . . . I guess I wrote this with hopes - you know . . . it reminded me of that part in Edward Scissorhands where she is dancing like an angel beneath the flying ice . . . as a child . . . thank you Thank you Karilea! Thank you so much Lee Donna? Long for the winter OMGGG *smile* nooooooooooooooo . . . Thank you Chris . . . missed you Lady Icey . . . your welcome and . . . maybe at one time, I did too . . . Thanks guys |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sue, I just long to see the snow. It brings such beautiful images to mind, almost inspiring me to write again, which in itself would be a wonder....lol....(duets anyone???? grinz....) Wouldn't it be perfect if we could see the beauty, without having to drive on it?? lol.... May your days be blessed with sunshine dear gal! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you are so lovely....so much depth here in so little words....so good to see you Sue, hoping this means you will be around for a little while? hugssss I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
very nice, I like the way it builds |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Gawd Sue I luvs ya!!!! *wipes the tears from her eyes* I'm being sincere here...okie?? Next time I call be home okie!?!?!? lol...  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so glad you and your words are back, Sue M |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi littlewing...it is so good to see a post from you again. I was beginning to think aliens had abducted you! LOL! I love this. It is well written and whispers to my heart. Bravo! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
/pip/Forum90/HTML/001983.html Thank you Karen Donna? anytime, I would be honored . . . Lauren . . . *smile* so good to see you (maybe) *grin* Kris!!!!!!!!!!! I wasnt home awww I miss you . . . silly thing . . . Maureen thank you so much Thank you Kevin *smile* abducted? I went by my own freewill . . . tyvm Thank you everyone . . . |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Snowflakes in a land where you wear shorts? Hmmm.. Nice images, Sue. It is sooo good to see you writing again. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Breathtaking Sue! Love this...very much. Hugs~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wonderful!  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This little poem of yours bursts just like the sun. You deserve something good and I'm glad you found it!!! Missed you tweetsie~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sue! It would be my honor hon, and if you've ever the mind to, please email me. Oh, what a darn delight it would be! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ken - aha - wait - in about two months - there shall be snow here *smile* thank you Thank you Nancy you are so sweet - I have missed you Thank you iliana! aww Lori . . . so do you! (tweetsie *smile*) Donna . . . sure thing - email on its way I would be honored . . . Thank you everyone . . . |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Vivid...very good...thank you.. Goldenrose The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
stunning in its simplicity.....you've captured a moment forever. Great write!!!! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
How did I miss this??? I'm sure glad it came around again. Yes, stunning! miscellanea |
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