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froggy
Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan

0 posted 2004-08-30 12:39 PM



Just  Love


Walk…
in front of me
  behind me
      and    
   beside me

Cry…
because of me
in spite of me
      and
with me

Laugh…
towards me
  around me
       and
because of me
        
Love…
because of me
In spite of me
      and
   with me

Believe
in me
  as I believe
    in you

I need your smiles
your  dreams
       and  all of
your tomorrows

© Copyright 2004 E.Griswold - All Rights Reserved
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-08-30 03:06 PM


This is very, very nice - I like it's feel and flow and the thoughts behind it.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-08-30 03:10 PM


I wonder if this is possible...but, nevertheless, so beautifully put...thank you for sharing, writing and hope.

Luv
Lee J.

froggy
Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
3 posted 2004-08-31 01:39 AM


Thank-you Susan for the wonderful
comment.

Thank-you LeeJ for the wonderful comment.

I wrote this to go onto a just because greeting card.

Thank-you both again so very much.

:-)

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