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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-08-30 07:38 AM


A Sprinkle of Fantasy

She sprinkles me with flowers flow
Like wind that drives the powdered snow
And then with just a pinch of yeast
She bakes for me the bread of feast.

Coats the crust with oil of aim
And cooks it with desires flame
Bellows it with spirits awe
Until she reaches to the core

And I am done to ecstasy
Within a phantoms fantasy
Alive and yet a puppets play
Absorbed into a night of stray

Spellbound in the taste of joy
Drunk within the grapes of ploy
Held within Chantilly lace
The red of rose held to my face

It’s here I often weep and cry
The reap that sweeps the moon to die



© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-08-30 07:51 AM


absolutely perfect write...very much enjoyed

your inner core is showing this morning...smiles and hugs...so good to see you

Toerag
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2 posted 2004-08-30 07:54 AM


One of your best Sy.....
Rick
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3 posted 2004-08-30 08:08 AM


Just wonderful Seymour, much enjoyed my friend, good to see your writes here, take care and be well.

Sincerely
Rick

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4 posted 2004-08-30 08:47 AM


And what a moon it was last night!
So THAT was the sound that kept me
tossing and turning...

and here I thought it was a coyote's song!

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5 posted 2004-08-30 08:50 AM


Your fantasy sprinkled my morning with the supreme satisfaction of great poetry... I thank you!!
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6 posted 2004-08-30 10:33 AM


Hello Seymour !!  Ah, a joy to read your poetry again after returning from camping. Hugs to you this sunny morn. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

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7 posted 2004-08-30 12:36 PM


good ending here
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2004-08-30 08:30 PM


LeeJ
Thank you dear.

Toerag
Always glad to see your comment.

Rick
Thank you my friend.

Sunshine


suthern
Thank you sweety.

Chris,
Always a joy to see your reply. Hugs

passing,

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