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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 2004-08-29 09:22 PM


No Doubt

Can this love of ours be real
Or is it just a fantasy
A nursery rhyme, a fairy tale
Whose story ends in travesty

Are you a knight, are you my knight
Straight out of tales like Camelot
Or is this all some writer’s ruse
To add a twist into his plot

Who is the one who staged my life
Its romance and its tragedy
And cursed poets with gift of rhyme
To pen it for the world to see

Can this be real, can you be real
My frightened breath escapes in wisps
You turn, your answer ever clear
You kiss the doubt right from my lips

I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S

© Copyright 2004 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-08-29 09:23 PM


No doubt...he's a winner!
Martie
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2 posted 2004-08-29 09:30 PM


Hoot...hi!

I don't know the answer...some things are real, and some not...and time tells the difference.  I hope all is well with you.  

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2004-08-29 09:50 PM


HootieGal~
I have No Doubt that this is heart ink~
Lucky you ... lucky he~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Lucie
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4 posted 2004-08-30 12:42 PM


I love this sweetie! Great write!

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.


suthern
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5 posted 2004-08-30 08:32 AM


You turn, your answer ever clear
You kiss the doubt right from my lips

Oh, yes! *S* There's no better doubt relief! *S* Beautiful work!

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2004-08-30 09:28 AM


Remembering such a kiss ...

lovely writing

M

Nan
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7 posted 2004-08-30 10:41 AM


Let's go for fantastically real... Have the best of both worlds, ya think?  Nice to see you here, m'friend...
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-08-31 12:18 PM


A kiss is something solid to hold onto too...James
passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-08-31 03:41 AM


enjoyed
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