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WindSong
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0 posted 2004-08-28 10:28 PM


AAS

Everytime I see your face,
I smile.
Everyime you touch me,
I get butterflies.
Your loving arms embrace me
when I'm sad.
I can't live without you
You've captivated my every limb
From the past to the present,
I never though I could be this happy.
I may be selfish at times
or high maintenence, but yet
you love me still.
Nothing will change as long
as I live.
Every corner I turn, I
know you're two steps behind-
catching me if I fall.
But in reality, you are
two steps ahead-warning me of
dangerous roads.
When I think I see you,
it's just my imagination.
When I think I smell you,
it's just the man passing by.
When I think I hear you,
it's only the wind.
Honestly, in my heart I
always hear you and in my dreams,
I always see you.
The miles between us
mean nothing.
The timeless efforts to see you,
signify how much I love you.
How I long to spend every moment with you
again and again.
Waking up next to you
is the greatest comfort
I've ever had.
It's the safest I've ever felt.
You are my security blanket.
I am protected from all harm.
Watching you as you move
and
listening to your astounding voice
brings a sparkle to my eye
and
a smile no one can measure.
When I cry, it's because
I love you.
I will never leave you.
I'll always be by your side.
Forever and Always,
I Love You.

~Kirah Danielle DeCarlo * August 28, 2004~


"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."
AAS is the persons initials of who this is about.

[This message has been edited by WindSong (08-28-2004 11:40 PM).]

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1 posted 2004-08-29 03:41 AM


name it what you feel is right...
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2 posted 2004-08-29 10:59 AM


Kirah~
I'd go for 'Captivating' ...
for I found your thoughts to be exactly that~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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3 posted 2004-08-29 11:01 AM


Yes, make it universal and choose
Captivation...

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