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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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afterglow of her fatal beauty i was lucky to live she could have torn out my heart right then instead i did after she was gone away things seemed quieter , almost like time stopped where was she now , having a drink ? basking in the sun of a tropical island ... my fantasy was roaming wild in a world so large now i am left with my shaving cream and toothbrush coffee cup blues , sip your life in a cup guess my location ....same lane dear always here , missed the paper yesterday behind on the fools typewriter blessings frost on my hat and nose , in the cold bus stop meeting ...there for a friend hidden in pretend ....princess of the matrix trinity of the network ability spiders web ....has the disk been destroyed into a land of no return and vip passes grail seekers discover their heaven in prayers for the goblets eternal wares ..truths have been revealed in a stones henge, and crop circle fields two thousand years of time drifted away in the sun and moons shadows something amazing we have found JDW III 8/28/04 [This message has been edited by aujussy wolf (08-29-2004 07:57 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...for some reason I thought of the lyrics from a song while I read this..."Your girlfriends moved to Switzerland, I'll bet she's found a new boyfriend."...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ The title lured me in (I LOVE IT when that happens) ... then you suspended me in your word-web~ 'truths have been revealed in a stones henge, and crop circle fields two thousand years of time drifted away in the sun snd moons shadows something amazing we have found' Amazing, indeed~ Thank you for the share of your thoughts~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
lol i missed a misspell .... thanks for the props , i like the vision in this write , almost like your going though a underground tunnel with a torch , hobbit type stuff or the goonies lol , thanks again for reading along ....i would like to write some storys , but am to hesitant ....maybe now would be a good time to start with a larger scale ....but for now the word webs continue on ....catch ya later ~james w  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Something amazing we have found... Haunting as I moved through the maze of your thoughts, leaving summer in the shadow of the autumn frost...a crisp clarity. Enjoy your wonderful talents very much JW. TD |
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