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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-08-27 03:22 PM


Oh, but to touch that brighter star
there, shining in a far off galaxy
    distant in the future.
If I could reach past that source of your pain
and sprinkle stardust that has floated down
from the heavens and blow it     gently
across the trails that you walk
in hopes that                  perhaps
tomorrow your steps could fall         lighter
so that you    might tread                softer
upon that path                within.

I would fly straight through the heavens
holding your hand
to make all of your dreams come true.

Dance!  Oh how we would dance
and the Gods in celestial skies
would be jealous
when Luna shone her light
upon two souls              held
in harmonies delight.


There are stars
millions
in the universe
but yours....


yours shines brighter
than those that just         hang there
clinging........to the darkness.

(c)dmsmith 08-23-02  (repost from open 22)


It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

© Copyright 2004 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-08-27 03:53 PM



this is magical
and whimsical!!!
smiling here

Susan
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2 posted 2004-08-27 10:08 PM


Great!  Dripping with stardust and night-time magic.     Susan

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Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-08-28 05:52 PM


For so many reasons
I find this so very special!

vandana
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4 posted 2004-08-28 07:30 PM


loved it
passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-08-28 08:56 PM


good stuff  
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-08-29 04:39 AM


Lovely....James
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7 posted 2004-08-29 05:56 AM


Very wonderfully written. You have a kind heart.
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2004-08-29 11:00 AM


FriendieGirl~
This is ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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