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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2004-08-27 08:15 AM



loose fur is my shepherd
spayed but she still wants
she lays down in the green pastures
and tracks mud on the carpet
she likes avion distilled water
and r&b or country soul

she used to be a guide dog
but shed too much
thus her name
when I walk through the valley
of the shadows
she is a pretty good watch dog
she fears no evil,
except the vet and men
with sticks or canes
but I comfort her then

she steals food from my enemies
or neighbors depending
and rolls in the oil
that drips from their truck
she steps in her water dish
and it overflows
she is a good dog
and will follow me
with love
all the days of her life
and will dwell in my house
forever
as far as she knows

_____________

Dark

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-08-27 08:32 AM


yea tho I walk through the valley of puppy breath, I'll fear no weavil?

grin.

I love ya much, yanno.

too cool, dawgman.

Gentle Spirit
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Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-08-27 08:34 AM


smiling here...
love this buddie, just love it...

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-08-27 08:37 AM


This...I am keeping.
She is precious
loose fur
and all.

LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-08-27 08:45 AM


dogs are a man's best friend...smiles and hugs...I liked
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2004-08-27 08:53 AM


a good one, D...brought back memories of my Afghan, Ginger..although I would never let her get oil on her...too long of hair to get that out of.

~smiling~
M

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with you
6 posted 2004-08-27 09:14 AM


gotta love the babies...
*sigh* I get so darn emotional over my dogs, wondering how i am going to make it, when they are gone...*sniffle*

Susan
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walking the surreal
7 posted 2004-08-27 10:34 AM


I smileth at thee with gladness in mine heart, for thou hast given me a chuckle and I am touched by thine tenderness towards this, thy faithful servant.  May thy house be blessed all the days of thy life.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2004-08-27 10:50 AM


Dark,
An enjoyable read, made me smile.

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2004-08-27 12:03 PM


sweet
Martie
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10 posted 2004-08-27 02:25 PM


DS

This was great!  My dog wants to meet your dog.  

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