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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-08-27 07:20 AM


Forevermore

To those that breathe the breath of life
And listen to the playing fife
History lies within our core
Beginning, end and evermore

It is the substance of the prime
The rhyming of the living time
The essence of the thing that’s born
And nothing is forever gone

We are the echoes of the ring
The circle of the bells that sing
Yin and yang that sounds the clang
We are the children of the bang

We are the substance of the sail
Evolving in forever’s bail
A Noah’s ark, ships embark
Sailing in an heir ship arc

No matter how you see the pass
We are the meadow and the grass.



© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-08-27 07:30 AM


and you Sir are every morning's first light of day and comfort.

Lovely write

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2004-08-27 07:32 AM


We are the dirt beneath the turf
the tendrils making lace the earth.
We are the leaflet green and new
and crumbled one brown leaf to dew.

We are all of this and less--
memory and forgetfulness.
We are all of this and more--
the reason that birds will soar

blissfully in circles eight,
eternity at heaven's gate,
whisking through a sky in bliss--
we are the love created this.



seymour?

You inspired me my love.

I hope you don't mind.

You made me think beyond my timid wing-span.

love ya, lovely!

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-08-27 07:37 AM


This hit home for me Sey, very deeply and in more ways than I can express so I shall simply say Thank You...

good morning sweets.  

Toerag
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4 posted 2004-08-27 07:42 AM


Yep..you're back with a bang....this kind of poem could go on forever....one of those "add on thinggies" the ladies here always come up with...well done ya old fart...
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5 posted 2004-08-27 09:08 AM


We are the echoes of the ring
The circle of the bells that sing
Yin and yang that sounds the clang
We are the children of the bang

~*~

We are the makers of the clay
we rise the sun and set the day;
we rock the cradle and steady the boat
that all good men and poets float

We hold the steed for the Quixotes that should
even smiling at Toe as he knew we would,
we are certainly good as keepers of flame,
so to this thread, I'll add my name.

~*~

And another thank you from one of the mass,
who appreciates each poem you cast
upon the seas of blue, and more,
you are our Sy, and our adore.

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2004-08-27 11:03 AM


LeeJ
And you are very sweet.  

serenity,
Timid wing span LOL I love ya sweet.

Gentle,
And I shall simply say. You welcome

Toerag,
LOL is that what your saying "old fart with an art"

Sunshine,
I always said you can't top sunshine.


passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-08-27 12:05 PM


yes

sigh

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8 posted 2004-08-27 01:29 PM


Kind Sir~
I sent a prayer upward, thanking Him for the eloquent beauty of you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2004-08-27 01:58 PM


passing,
Thank you sweet,

Marge,
You say the nicest things.

Martie
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10 posted 2004-08-27 09:02 PM


sy...Hi!

In the grasp of a withered hand
in the sound of crying
through the agony and strife of life
is found the art of dying

In the still within my heart
I dream as you in surrender
in search for peace and love's display
to be shown a magic blender



Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2004-08-27 11:27 PM


Martie
Lovely words, thank you.

iliana
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12 posted 2004-08-28 01:57 AM


Seymour, I did not think I would read a better one of yours than the last one.... but here, I have.  Yes, we are!   .....jo
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2004-08-28 07:32 AM


iliana
You are a delight,

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