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Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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0 posted 2004-08-26 01:49 AM


I may be following
or perhaps ahead
but I’m here, always here,
and not yet dead
to the birth of heartache
in one not yet of age.

The young and the old;
how special the day
when love paves the way
for the exchanging of pain
and as empathy joins
two breaking hearts
the bond between souls
is confirmed and defined
and remains forever
inviolate.

The physical showing
of love’s empathy
in the touching of arms,
bodies, cheeks, tears,
lights a candle beneath
the healing process
and lays a foundation
for honesty’s growth.

But to be like a man
on the sidelines withdrawn
from the cause and effect of it all
leads only to isolation
and no true companionship
in the forever and permanent world
of the spirit community …
perceived to be real
by the magic in me!


© Copyright 2004 Helen - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2004-08-26 04:15 AM


well done! enjoyed this!
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-08-26 10:22 AM


Dang, this is a beauty, Helen.
I'm saving this one, and thanking you for sharing it.

Martie
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3 posted 2004-08-26 10:24 AM


Helen

You are unique and very special.....a healer, I believe.  I am so glad I have gotten to know you!  

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2004-08-26 03:50 PM


Dixie - thanks so much.

Midnitesun - The beauty is in the reality of it.  Thank you for your kind comment.

Martie - you are truly a gifted and amazing person in that you touch on truth more often than you know.  

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