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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-08-25 07:42 PM


Blue Skies

Hello sweetheart,
it's nice to see you again.
You look delicious,
go ahead and jump in.
We're driving to Ko Olina,
in tranquil bays to soak and swim.
And then, I'll rub lotion
on your back,
so the sun won't
burn your silky skin.

JamesLee
August24
2004

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Susan
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1 posted 2004-08-25 08:13 PM


Mmmm, sounds nice.

  Susan

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Copperbell
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2 posted 2004-08-25 08:15 PM


must be a nice place to live - no beautiful places to swim here
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-08-26 04:29 AM



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4 posted 2004-08-26 07:47 AM


sounds good to me


LeeJ
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5 posted 2004-08-26 07:51 AM


mmmmm mmmmm....peaceful sights and sounds you have scripted.


Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2004-08-26 07:55 AM


very nice James.
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