Swaying Pearls (Duet w/Lady In White)

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Magnus

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0 posted 2004-08-25 04:24 PM

Thy key, I sayeth in storm’s clash
or rend from hinge thine oaken door.
As ivory jewels clench in gnash
and famished eyes hunger of more.

                           Little lock, hear the sing of key in entry
                           Let oak door swing within to me
                           Hear the scattered fall of pearls and gold
                           Someone’s fingers to find rent silk in history

Before thee lies anew one’s path
from fingers trace in swirling trance
for souls of twain there boils a stew
in wait one chime, one kiss perchance.

                         I hear him cry out from the longest ride
                         Yet he’ll not give o’er to Morpheus’ side
                         gathers to him his bride in trusted soul
                         who gives up her lips as his fingers guide

Till honey lies thy ruby lips
of dew and suckle on the vine
a strand of pearls shall grace thy hips
for I art thine of dreams recline.

                          “Dear Lord,” these, my whispered moans enchant
                           “I’m yours for want,” for I shall take the dance
                           and he in solemn touch garlands mine
                           full bellied hips with pearls of romance, to bind.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

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1 posted 2004-08-25 05:25 PM

ah.. very nice you two.. a sensual feel of smooth..andpearls do..feel smooth on the skin... just as this feels across the reader's mind..

bravo

Midnitesun

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Gaia

2 posted 2004-08-25 06:07 PM

luscious
a beautiful, sensual blending of two voices and pounding hearts

Susan
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walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-08-25 07:23 PM

Lush and sensual and elegant -- very well done. An excellent blend.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2004-08-26 07:26 AM

softly sensual, and oh so beautiful!
Well done Lady and Sir Barry...very well done.

LeeJ
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5 posted 2004-08-26 07:33 AM

bravo to both of you...stunning read

MGROVES

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california

6 posted 2004-08-26 07:35 AM

bravo

loved it

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

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7 posted 2004-08-26 09:50 AM

Sir Knight,

It was indeed an honor, once again,
to mix a song of line with you.

Thank you for ALL you bring to Passions.

passing shadows
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displaced

8 posted 2004-08-26 12:21 PM

whew! what a duet!

Martie

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9 posted 2004-08-26 12:24 PM

You write in atmosphere till I feel like I am there, watching this scene from some long ago. Wonderful duet, you two!!

Ericc
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10 posted 2004-08-26 02:35 PM

Beautiful writing!

Eric

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2004-08-26 05:48 PM

Thank You Lady for gracing me with your
words of composition...Always a pleasure
writing with you. We shall write again.

Thanx to all of the poets who have read and
enjoyed this piece. Your comments are well
received.

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

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Alberta, Canada

12 posted 2004-08-26 08:41 PM

Stunningly beautiful...you two weave so well together...I love it...

vandana

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13 posted 2004-08-27 08:57 PM

nice duet

barbaraj
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since 2003-01-24

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Nova Scotia, Canada

14 posted 2004-08-28 05:12 PM

this is a most excellent poem you two

I hope that when the world comes to an end, I can breathe a sigh of relief, because there will be so much to look forward to...

ice
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since 2003-05-17

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Pennsylvania

15 posted 2004-08-28 06:20 PM

A song, yes, that is what this is.....one of statement and refrain..well done by two creative poets, glad I had the chance to read this...

------ice
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Come read to me some poem,
Some simple and heartfelt lay,
That shall soothe this restless feeling
And banish the thoughts of day.
Longfellow

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

16 posted 2004-08-29 01:17 AM

Really nice duet, you two! Loved the title and how the pearls where woven throughout the poem.

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