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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-08-25 01:20 PM



Ignoring your carefully drawn
lines of composure,
             I stepped outside,
drew my own circle of fire,
let my asbestos mindset save me
from your damning flames.

Don’t even think ‘bout stepping
inside.



© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-08-25 01:32 PM


Don’t even think ‘bout stepping
inside.


You tell em Kacy!  I love this, so powerful!

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2 posted 2004-08-25 01:32 PM


(chuckling)..

now there indeed is a warning...

nicely written ma'am....

remind me not to play with matches in the future

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3 posted 2004-08-25 01:40 PM


LOL
just burnin off some steam for someone else

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4 posted 2004-08-25 01:43 PM


lol.. sounds a bit more like flames than steam... one could get burned badly I think trying to cross the lines you drew here..


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5 posted 2004-08-25 01:45 PM


lol...Kacy, I think this is one time they want to stay away from the fire!! burn...........
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6 posted 2004-08-25 01:48 PM


"Ignoring your carefully drawn
lines of composure,
             I stepped outside,
drew my own circle of fire,"

way cool write....
loved this

wandering glider
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7 posted 2004-08-25 02:43 PM


Now there's another way of "stepping outside".
Safer too.

-glider-

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8 posted 2004-08-26 02:40 PM


Wonderful write!

Eric

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9 posted 2004-08-27 02:39 AM


oh yeah!
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