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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Awe could I have but touched the halo around your skin it might have been enough for I couldn’t make you love me but it might have been warm to stand in awe in your shadow just some words cut out |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
could I have but touched the halo around your skin it might have been enough for I couldn’t make you love me but it might have been warm to stand in awe in your shadow WOW! smiling at you* this is wonderful Helen, very well done, excellent writing! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
my friend... you should stand in the shadow of no one.. your own light and your own warmth eclipses that of those who would have you do so |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yep zactly what he said |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
completely....a keeper...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ Such beauty in the nimbus moment of your thoughts~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
very nice |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I find this sad - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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