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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2004-08-25 01:06 PM



I run
  I hide
     And still you find me

Alone I fade
   Alone I weep
     And yet you won't let me go

Still I find shadows
   Still I test the deep
     But your face is always there

Hurt I bleed
   Pain never ending
     Yet still you cling

Scars that won't fade
   Cuts that won't heal
      Callous inflictions of your love

I run
   I hide
      Still...you find me
  

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-08-25 01:06 PM


oh Paula, I felt this.  This cuts deep.
very well done, and hugs to you.

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2 posted 2004-08-25 01:33 PM


Paula, maybe it's time to wear a garlic necklace? Hugs to you.

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3 posted 2004-08-25 01:45 PM


"I run
  I hide
     And still you find me

Alone I fade
   Alone I weep
     And yet you won't let me go

Still I find shadows
   Still I test the deep
     But your face is always there"


oh I like this one a lot

wandering glider
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4 posted 2004-08-25 02:48 PM


Maybe you can get into a witness protection program?  

-glider-

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-08-26 04:36 AM



Goldenrose
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6 posted 2004-08-26 04:51 AM


Very nice writing paula..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Buffalo girl won't you come out tonight..come out tonight...(George Bailey~It's A Wonderful Life)

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7 posted 2004-08-26 07:17 AM


good writing, sad but good


LeeJ
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8 posted 2004-08-26 07:36 AM


good write, could almost visulize you running

Liked the format as well.


Paula Finn
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9 posted 2004-08-26 01:10 PM


Thanks y'all and Glider? LMAO at the Witness Protection Program
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2004-08-29 04:47 AM


Nice writing...James
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