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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
My finger found its way To your slightly swollen lips And in bare pass touched them As my own still ached to But you said it was time to go And laughed when in the mirror Kiss pressed You said people would think you petulant If you did not dress up the remnants of us Before presenting yourself My answer was swallowed By a rumble of thunder Which was just as well Because the words I spoke Belied the moisture of the day Arranged You smiled And asked me to go away And by the way Did I know when it rained It was all electric Some how [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (08-25-2004 12:11 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 I was born on a rainy day, and still love a really good drenching storm. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
there is always something about storms.. and about wet.. that is enticing |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
you write passion the way I like to read it...and now without saying something I shouldn't will bow out and applaud.... you amaze me...with every word of yours I read |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
JB.. something you shouldn't? (chuckling).. I'm not sure what that would be... always good to see you here... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron "And by the way Did I know when it rained It was all electric" It's been such a long time ....I am waiting for a storm, have waited a long time! Thanks for writing of them for me. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Martie.. we've had a spate of them lately.. and for you I hope one comes soon..so you can enjoy it as I know you do... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
My finger found its way To your slightly swollen lips And in bare pass touched them As my own still ached to whewww, those first four lines passionately grabbed the reader by both shoulders with a deep glaze, coaxing to read more...which by the way, didn't take much...excellent read and write. Excellent! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's always electric when you write.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Lee... glad you found something in it to enjoy.. thank you for the read. and the words Sunshine..lol.. more a short circuit of brain cells don't you think? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
And asked me to go away And by the way Did I know when it rained It was all electric Some how Yep, gotta love that electicity... wet and wild is good....yes sir indeed... very well done sir. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"My finger found its way To your slightly swollen lips And in bare pass touched them As my own still ached to But you said it was time to go And laughed when in the mirror Kiss pressed You said people would think you petulant If you did not dress up the remnants of us Before presenting yourself" I love it when your head overflows onto the page like this... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Donna.... yes it can be... if not followed by the shivering of cold..overexposures... thanks to you..for all the nice words.. Dunc.. so I can't spell... that is what happens when the stuff that overflows onto the page is potential for stink bait |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always enjoy you |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well.. always enjoying something is a good thing... so I thank you ma'am |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Ill tempered electric thunderous hmmmmmm . . . sounds like a relationship -glider- |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well see it was record hot here, so I did this rain dance, and guess it worked as it has not stopped pouring since. Talk about rain! Swollen lips is right! Amazing read sir. Your head can spill on a page? Wow that is some trick!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Way ta go Mr. Smooth....but I gotta give ya an 85 on your spelling test...Ok, I'll let you have a 90, how is that? Hi Ron, how is your day? Hope well? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Glider... appreciate the read.. and the thoughts.. Mysteria... lol.. rain dances should only be done with care... as they have always told me.. be careful what you ask for.. appreciate the drop by..and the words.. Barry... lmao.. if I could remember to use spell check as it should be used.. my spelling would improve..or at least appear to... the day has been busy..as are the weeks and months.. but better busy than not.. how's life in your part of the world? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
We are both laughing Ron, and I too agree that work is money, no matter how you stack it. Busy here as well....dodging occasional hurricanes...and a thunderstorm or three.... Barry |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
thunderstorms here... no hurricanes.. sometimes tornadoes... but not many recently... thank goodness... and yes.. work is money... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Something electric in the air. I like this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
As always, a question is left lingering for your readers to ponder. Hope all is well, Ron. Corinne |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Cpat, It's good to be able to read for a minute or two. Gosh, you're good! From the title on down, I could relate to everything. YOu have a marvelous way of communicating with everyone. miscellanea |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Karilea is right...it IS always electric when you write.  Enjoyed immensely Sir Ron  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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