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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-08-25 09:12 AM




Imprinted Upon My Heart


Sometimes I read your words
and I am left held in awe.
It is not only of how you manage
to master your craft,
but also of how
each word wraps itself around me
captivating me.

*~Leaving me wanting for more.....~*

More of the beauty encapsulated
in each word as I visualize it
in my minds eye view.
More of the sudden warmth felt
when reading words from your heart.

A smile escapes me
when I read the joy found
there in your eyes.

*~You whisper and I hear.~*

You have spoken softly
through your pen,
leaving your words forever
imprinted upon my heart.


{© dmsmith 12-10-02  revised from open 23}


It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

© Copyright 2004 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-08-25 09:16 AM


yes! It happens so often here....it always amazes me, how much, words can touch....

this is wonderful Donna!

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2 posted 2004-08-25 09:22 AM


I believe I've felt that way over 40,000 times or more...

including over yours.  You captured my feelings, dear, and laid them down with eloquence.

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-08-25 09:39 AM


yes, isn't it wonderful...the words how they do so embrace us...our souls...and lift us up to a place that we've never known before...poets, artists, music...can certainly be an inspiration...and we dance to the flow of change...

Tremendous write, oh how I love reading you


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4 posted 2004-08-25 10:27 AM


Donna, your words are also imprinted in my heart.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Susan
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5 posted 2004-08-25 10:30 AM


Oh yes, this says it.  I feel this too.  And you've penned it so beautifully -
what a beautiful soul you have dearest Donna.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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6 posted 2004-08-25 11:21 AM


yes, yes, yes...and you write it on our hearts beautifully
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7 posted 2004-08-25 12:47 PM


it's amazing what treasures the archives hold
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8 posted 2004-08-25 04:03 PM


SweetestGentleSpirit~
Oh yes .....~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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HopeS
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9 posted 2004-08-26 01:18 AM


So true Donna ,they are  heartprints etched forever

Hope

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10 posted 2004-08-26 01:33 AM


Words of beauty... etched into the surface of the hearts that have the luck to read it.

One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world...

choshi
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11 posted 2004-08-26 01:46 AM


Beautifully said, Donna.....and oh how true....~P
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12 posted 2004-08-26 01:52 AM


How encouraging your words are to all of us who put "pen to paper".  Thank you!
Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2004-08-26 07:45 AM


You are all so very welcome, and I thank you for your kind words.  
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14 posted 2004-08-26 08:05 AM


that was beautiful


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