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Plagued
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Plagued |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Plagued He pushed his way into my mind, triggered by a word or two. Yet there it was, a full blown mare night or day, in hours grew. Until the waking, shaking feel brought eyes to open, wide in fear. Trying now within without uneasiness to disappear. So, sitting here upon the dread alarmed with worry suited tight. Restricted thoughts seam closed the will awaiting morn to win the fight. Bit by bit undressing layers wishing sun to light the dark. And lift the fog that binds my mind, uncord, release his one remark. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Amazing how some words can linger and remind so vividly, very well expressed dear friend, may you sleep with warming dreams tonight. Enjoyed the read, great. Sincerely Rick |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and the feelings are not unaccounted for, nor never will be. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
mmm how you doing Ms M ? well written..as usual.. but what lies inside the words is painful..and I hope not haunting... hugs my friend |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...(sigh) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
so poignant M~ heart hugs.....and understanding... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yeah, make him let go heart hugs, M |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yes, one word, and sometimes it lingers, like the plague - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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