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exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-08-25 01:11 AM

i think i feel my heart in my throat
beating 120 beats per minute
is that healthy?

the words feel out of my heart and onto the keyboard,
so impersonal,don't you think?
what made me believe i had to tell you,
the one thing that's kept me sane
kept my heart from exploding all over everybody,
is beyond me.

it feels like i can't breathe
and if i do,my lungs will explode.

you don't need to say anything..
i just had a random act of love is all..

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-08-25 01:15 AM

a pretty powerful moment
heart-in-throat symptom...sounds familiar

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-08-25 04:31 AM

dang! wow!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-08-25 11:44 AM

whewwwwww....how power packed is this
and who would have known, until that day comes knocking at your door
This brought a smile to my heat

Great words come from your mind

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2004-08-25 11:52 AM

yes.. very nicely done...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-08-25 04:04 PM

Chelsea~
It is from your heart that you share with us all~
Thank you for being a poet~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

6 posted 2004-08-25 07:04 PM

wow you guys are way to sweet,i liked this poem,but i didnt think it was that good haha,you guys rock my world.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-08-25 08:15 PM

I agree with the above, this rocks. Especially the last lines.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

8 posted 2004-08-25 09:58 PM

ramdom acts express themselves at the strangest times...and anything to do with the heart is not impersonal.

I love this.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill

jamesjiao
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon

9 posted 2004-09-13 03:34 AM

Sweet poem

. Random it maybe.. but it's the love that counts.. This world can not operate without love!

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.

Margot
Member

since 2003-10-04

Posts 154

10 posted 2004-09-13 03:50 AM

I agree. very powerful

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

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