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Suspended sentiment
emotions caught in rhyme
that moment, we will never have
now somewhere
lost in time

it was our should have been
that once upon an unstrung
heart string
the song we both hear
yet were never able
to sing

always off by slight degree
slipping by, our chances
for what could have been
our, we were meant to be
that once in a lifetime love
of you and me


~SEA~

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1 posted 08-25-2004 12:05 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Susan, Susan, you lady are the definitely the Queen of Hearts.  That was incredible and of course Hanks is one of my favorite artists, so the blending of the two artists here ROCK BABY!
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thank you very much. It was you who introduced me to his art....I love it...so thanks for that too!
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"Suspended sentiment
emotions caught in rhyme
that moment, we will never have
now somewhere
lost in time"

Catches you at the strangest times, huh?  The reality of never again...
Hiya Susan...  
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4 posted 08-25-2004 12:11 AM       View Profile for *Belabebeautiful*   Email *Belabebeautiful*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Belabebeautiful*

oh that was so sweet, it just screams out to the hopeless romantic in me. Beautifully written.
~Live and Laugh~

Don't look to me for perfection for I will surely let you down.
~Bella~

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5 posted 08-25-2004 12:50 AM       View Profile for HopeS   Email HopeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HopeS's Home Page   View IP for HopeS

Beautiful Susan , you word your feelings perfectly .... by the way Steve Hanks is my favourite , I often attach his paintings to my poems when sending them via email to someone special

Hope
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dang, but this one is so sad! but so beautifully written, with photo to match
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beautiful
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Seems like the photo is gone, but the words remain...thank goodness!  A wonderful weave, my SEA...
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9 posted 08-25-2004 07:15 AM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

i feel this today...

a lovely write
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ahhhh yes, a familiar ring brings sentiments close and safe.  Lovely write...touched a chord of soul...thank you
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always touching ..
and always a pleasure to read
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liked it
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a pleasure to read you again SEA, your words have been missed. This is extremely soft and beautiful!
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How freeing this portrait, both words and graphic. Love the thoughts this inspires.
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SweetSEA~

'it was our should have been
that once upon an unstrung
heart string'


Ah, you knew I would know the rhythmn to this unsung heart song~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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this is beautiful, lovve the pic too

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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beautiful

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Suspended sentiment
emotions caught in rhyme
that moment, we will never have
now somewhere
lost in time

it was our should have been
that once upon an unstrung
heart string
====================


ya had me from the title on
ya knew the moth was love this one..
love the melodics of this... an aching bitterswet beauty.. we wont ever forget that one that cut us the deepest...
a moth anthem..and a keeper

We go where there is love when ever we are lonely ... going back, we find,
enough love stayed behind to make us feel at home.

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Sea girl...So lovely, the pic and poem, and you!
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~sniff~
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Wonderful....James
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Thank you all very much for your great replies they mean a lot to me...
and Duncan...yeah it's never when I expect it...
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23 posted 08-28-2004 06:54 PM       View Profile for aujussy wolf   Email aujussy wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aujussy wolf

the poem and the picture were great , even better together  
~w
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I'm not sure which was better...the poem or the pic, but together...wonderful!!
Love the artist, will look him up
 
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