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*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

0 posted 2004-08-24 11:41 PM

This was written a while ago and while reading it now brings back painfull memories, I still like the poem in itself, hope you enjoy...

Crystalen tears pool
in these unextrodenary eyes
before they fall, like flawed diamonds
onto my bleeding heart

Vapid waters swirl around my feet
sensing the confusion inside me
they ask no questions and tell no answers
but are merly there, like myself

There in a void of nothingness
like a translucent dream
transformed into a nightmarish reality
of which there is no escape...

What is to become of me?

Don't look to me for perfection for I will surely let you down.
~Bella~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-08-24 11:54 PM

Vivid imagery, Bella. I can feel your pain in this one.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2004-08-24 11:55 PM

such a sad write....so glad you aren't there now...

"Crystalen tears pool
in these unextrodenary eyes
before they fall, like flawed diamonds
onto my bleeding heart"

liked this part best...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-08-25 03:46 AM

I relate to this...in a way

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

4 posted 2004-08-25 09:16 AM

oh so sad, but yes I did enjoy your writing on it

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-08-25 09:54 AM

Vapid waters swirl around my feet
sensing the confusion inside me
they ask no questions and tell no answers
but are merly there, like myself

could feel the bewilderment...very well done

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-08-25 10:32 AM

Glad you posted this. It is very good and I can understand it well.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2004-08-25 07:39 PM

Enjoyed...James

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