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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-08-24 07:32 PM


Even I

Even I have my low moments,
my losses of confidence,
when I realize that I don't
actually have what I want,
Only pieces of pretense,
sensual moments of desire
followed with buckets of emptiness.
On those days life seems
like its a game I play,
and my search for happiness
seems like its at least
a thousand miles away.

JamesLee
August26
2004



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Susan
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1 posted 2004-08-24 10:03 PM


Owie - this aches and you conveyed this so well.  Much understanding here --

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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2 posted 2004-08-26 08:39 AM


so sad but like it


passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-08-26 12:52 PM


everybody doesn't have something
LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-08-26 01:03 PM


good one
Ericc
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5 posted 2004-08-26 02:33 PM


Great write James.

Eric

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