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0 posted 2004-08-24 03:07 PM



Under my skin

where life runs thin
and nothing can stop
the diffusion of pain,


time

is of the essence,
and we’ve little left
though it will have to be enough.

Don’t sit

and wait
for the wall to fall
that separates us all.



© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-08-24 03:10 PM


where life runs thin
and nothing can stop
the diffusion of pain,



Yep Kacy, that's right where it gets me too, under my skin. sigh.....
well done gal...

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2 posted 2004-08-24 03:21 PM


ah... the degree of separation bewteen us all is relative to the abilty the individual has to understand that in non euclidian geometry..all lines intersect eventually.


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3 posted 2004-08-24 03:26 PM


Whispering a soft thank you, Donna.

Ron, I always enjoy your angles.

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4 posted 2004-08-24 03:41 PM


(chuckling).. I personally always enjoyed curves....
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5 posted 2004-08-24 03:42 PM


Wow...excellent write!

Eric

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6 posted 2004-08-24 03:53 PM


thank you for that, Eric!
and Ron, I'll throw you a curve with the next write if I ever get my geometry write right

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7 posted 2004-08-24 04:11 PM


geometry is both complex and simple... and I know enough to know I don't know enough.. lol..

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8 posted 2004-08-24 04:13 PM


I need more geometry tutoring.
BTW, I did save this reply. Just in case.

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9 posted 2004-08-24 04:15 PM


what reply? lol


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10 posted 2004-08-24 04:19 PM


When 'life runs thin' we have to hurry to get it all in.  I can hear the clock ticking. I like the way you phrased this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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11 posted 2004-08-24 04:19 PM


ROTFLMAO, Ron, I need to rename you Sir SPEEDO.

Sir speedo
keeps a torpedo
and shoots down replies
right before your eyes!
LOL



Pilgrimage, thanks for reading and replying!

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12 posted 2004-08-24 04:24 PM


I am subject to mind ramblings and various vacancies between the ears, which at times cause me to type half thoughts and half images... :-)
removing them is done for the mental health of all who might be perplexed at my lack of tact in writing short half poetic pieces in someone else's thread..

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13 posted 2004-08-24 04:28 PM


LOL, you are funny. Now we'll have to see if I can save faster than you delete. *echo chuckling here*
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