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Manth88
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since 2003-06-15
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0 posted 2004-08-24 01:14 AM





What if the sun didn’t shine tomorrow?
What if I fell in love tomorrow?
What if it rained tomorrow?
What if someone you love died tomorrow.
What if you get fired tomorrow?
What if you get dumped tomorrow?
What if you get in a wreck tomorrow?
What if you get engaged tomorrow?
What if I die tomorrow?
What if somebody told you that this was reality?

Just Sorta Popped Into My Head One Day!!

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brezee
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since 2003-06-02
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1 posted 2004-08-24 01:18 AM


this is so true, kinda wakes ya up! nice job! it's short but has a lot of impact, keep writing, you're definitely improving!!!


~*brezee*~

Mon Cherie
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2 posted 2004-08-24 11:18 AM


Half of those questions there have been through my mind a few times too... But in response to one question... :P I'd REALLY love to be in love tomorrow... *sheepish grin* Thanks for sharing this...

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Florence

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