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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-08-23 04:53 PM



Unmoved


Sunday passed
without much notice
I guess it was because
Friday was so difficult
and here without
anything else is Monday
yielding no comfort
in the ink of my soul
just more scratching
upon the surface
of my onioned skin
so unmoved, in no release
except more of my blood

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-08-23 06:54 PM


Sounds like you need a hug, Helen.   ...jo
littlewing
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2 posted 2004-08-23 08:52 PM


Helen, you have just described uhh .  . .
every day . . . *laughing* (missed you)

and here without
anything else is Monday

aujussy wolf
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3 posted 2004-08-23 09:27 PM


lol looks like we had the same type of weekend
good write slickster ...there is always hope for a better day ahead
~jw

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-08-24 03:44 AM



Laney
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5 posted 2004-08-24 04:08 AM


This totally explains my weekend....good write; made me feel better..lol
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