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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-08-23 08:50 AM


Hush…
Can you hear woven imagery?
Similes with remarkable IQ’s…like
Man eating wolves stalking perception
Devouring mind illnesses….
Deliberate precision, desire, intimacy
Manifestation skilled
Inherently human message boards
With a stranger’s tears of priceless tolls
Trapped in a smile
Almost unlawful, intentional stokes
Recovery that won’t turn around
Painting spread by some incurable virus
Lying there in shock, with breast enlargements
Graphics of submission, unfolding mouths
Outsmarting this season’s game
Drinking at a new tavern
Sneaking a Mickey to wheezing crawls
Some digital study of puritan hardball
Peeling back the face of information
Blue and torn shells once malignant
Charitable isn’t it?
Voodoo strategy wearing contact lenses
Eating birthday cake
Throwing away Viagra prescriptions
Welcome to year 01


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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2004-08-23 09:12 AM


let the wolves play
in the other room
give me the windows
and the morning
and

this is super

Rick
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
2 posted 2004-08-23 09:42 AM


Dear Lee, you are so far past my grasp dear friend, your thoughts seem to so outweigh mine, I feel you write a thousand stories in a few short verses, it would interest me so to know how long it takes you to put these works to paper. You amaze me with description but lose me in the maze. Always a pleasure and education Lee, sorry I can’t react more as you do for me. Good to see you here dear friend, maybe again tomorrow.

Sincerely
Rick

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2004-08-23 09:58 AM


You are such a deep thinker... and as others have said, there is so much to read and enjoy within your lines. Have a nice day...isn't it beautiful today???

*s
M

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-08-23 10:37 AM


Wow...

Such very deep thoughts here, I do agree, a marvelous write Lee J.

JL

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